Monday, April 22, 2013

Poem: A Proposal Rhyme





While writing this rhyme,
hope I create no fuss. 
I have been cherishing you,
as you walked all over the campus.
Let me capture your fluid beauty, 
hope you don’t refuse.
I propose to you, one simple deal; 
will you be my muse?
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Can I be your abacus,
on which you can count on?
Let me enter your story
and bring into your life, a new dawn.
To be there for one another, 
for a vow that has no end.
I propose to you, one yummy meal; 
will you be my friend?
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Is it your unusual name,
I want to scribble on a misty glass?
Or is it your ivory teeth,
that makes every melancholy surpass?
Yours hands may get dirty,
so let me be your glove
I propose to you, on my kneel; 
will you be my love?
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-Ashish

40 comments:

  1. be assured ur lady love will be clean bowled with these awesome lines!!

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    1. She hasn't read this yet.. :D

      On wait! there is no 'She' :D

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  2. Interesting bit about scribbling on misty glass!

    http://nilabose.blogspot.com/2013/04/mists-of-glass.html

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    1. that was a lovely poem...
      thanks for sharing it here :)

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  3. Nice one bro ! liked the rhythm and flow !

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  4. Beautiful..I had this poster long time back, you brought the memories back

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    1. ok. glad I could do that...
      thanks :)

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  5. Lovely poem !
    Can I be your abacus,
    on which you can count on?
    :)

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    1. If you are asking me that question...tehn yes, you can be :P :D

      thanks.

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  6. That was a cute, and a very different proposal :)
    Can I be your abacus,
    on which you can count on? .......A very unique line! Hatts off ^_^>

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  7. clean bowled.. lol.. romantically interesting.. can i be your abacus.. wow.. very well written.. loved it.. :-)

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  8. very nice poem, vishal. counting on abacus was simply innocent and romantic.

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  9. absolutely beautiful---yes the lady will be clean bowled

    I propose to you, one simple deal;
    will you be my muse?

    simple and beautiful

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    1. :')

      thanks Rajni.

      The lady doesn't know this...yet. :D

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  10. What a way to propose !!! Keep us posted about her reply ;)

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    1. She doesn't know this yet.. that's the catch. :D

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  11. The picture reminded me of the Hallmark cards era. The poem speaks of innocence and love. Keep them coming.

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    1. I propose to you, on my kneel...beautiful lines

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    2. Thanks a lot mynascene and Farah... :)

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  12. Ohw!! That's a sweet and lovely poem Ashish!! ^_^

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    1. everybody loved it...except the one who should've liked it :D

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  13. your blog is full of love, innocence, & humour..
    This proposal is a blessing to that girl.
    one can actually imagine that moment. :-)

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