Friday, October 4, 2013

Sacrifice



Relinquishing my child’s chuckles and my bride’s tender serenity
I pledged to imperishably fortify your esteemed dignity
I stood opaque before their pernicious intents
And amalgamated my chest with bullets
But my unbreakable oath prevails
Mother, accept my devotion
Of this Unalloyed
Unbiased, Undying
Sacrifice

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Written for 'The Nine Flavors'
Flavor: Heroic, Bravery (Veer Rasa)


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14 comments:

  1. Lovely! Especially the use of font size. It's like a soldier fighting and sacrificing his life for motherland...Lovely imagery!

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    1. thanks, Nikhil

      glad that i could portray exactly what i wanted to.

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  2. This is beautiful and a true ode to the brave hearts who fight for the motherland :)

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  3. that's the beautiful way to depict Veer Rasa

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  4. Your posts are always so distinct Ashish! Very lovely depiction! :)

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  5. That is really a very beautiful portrayal of a brave sacrifice made by a real hero!! :) nice one :)

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